I hate to be judgmental, but so far the grammar and spelling is hurting my brain. Obviously you can publish an e-book without the need for an editor nor, it appears, a friend with a half decent grasp of English to proof read it for you. I'm trying not to judge the story so far based on the lack of editing, but the poor grammar and spelling mixed with a very simplistic writing style is distracting.
Here's a couple of extracts verbatim:
One of my teachers told my Mother at a school open night that I was going to amount to nothing when I left school that I would be a lay about.
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Then on to the next level "Combat Engineering" in Farnborough, were along with this came the old driving test.
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The Rescue Team was particularly interesting for me as it gave me the chance to give a little back and help were help was needed most.
Then after six years of marriage, my life took a complete turn after being completely shattered by my wife.
After finding out that, my wife was sleeping with someone else.
Within six months of this event, I managed to sort all the money problems out and head out on the biggest adventure of my life so far.
At this time I was living on and off with a very nice woman, Helen.
We were both members of the Rescue Team and she said to me one random day.
"Why don't you go traveling? This could be an ideal opportunity for you"
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The mission of the group of climbers was to just find new places and climbing them, what more could I ask for. I thought to myself.
Hot Rock Global Challenge. "Sounds Good".
Therefore, I rang the contact number and spoke to a guy called Stuart.
