Please need critique

[Jim Lapenta]

My opinion is that it's a great shot!!! I would welcome that shot into my collection any day. While the composition is not as interesting as some I've seen, you take what's given to you by the fish at the time you take the shot. Unfortunately, we just can't order the fish to do what we want them to!!!!! Keep up the good work.

Regards,

Bill

You're not using the right tone of voice. My son says to use a big boy voice and anything will do what you want it to. The military taught him that.

 

[EastEndDiver]

Very good shot! The only thing I would do is in the upper left hand corner there is that white "banded" coral which pulls your eye away from the fish,I would use the clone or healing brush to do away with the white and blend it into the "Reddish" coral color.