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Chapter 6 is on my website now.
In the first draft of this novel, the church was a giant edifice in gleaming marble and had attracted the notice of a conniving bishop looking to place his nephew in the Pastor's position. As I review and polish the novel I wonder if I made the right move to downsize the church. Any thoughts on this?
How do you feel about the difference between a small town Pastor struggling to keep his church as opposed to a successful Pastor battling a political bishop?
Let me know.
Thanks,
Brian
In the first draft of this novel, the church was a giant edifice in gleaming marble and had attracted the notice of a conniving bishop looking to place his nephew in the Pastor's position. As I review and polish the novel I wonder if I made the right move to downsize the church. Any thoughts on this?
How do you feel about the difference between a small town Pastor struggling to keep his church as opposed to a successful Pastor battling a political bishop?
Let me know.
Thanks,
Brian
