RJP all Walmart apps are computerized questions multiple choice. What you smart people with perfect English skills fail at is clearly the common sense of you never turn in anything your write the first time. You always have someone check over your work. Then you rewrite it, you Ass-ume that I would turn something that hasn't been proof read or checked. That leads me to believe that you are not a very intuitive thinker. I thought divers were supposed to be constantly assessing the situation? Well a lot of your assessments lead you to be mislead. By your first assumption that to leads you to the conclusion that this is how I always type. Shows about how critical your thinking is. I don't think I would hire anyone to do anything with diving if they couldn't critically think. Or in that matter be around them to dive there a danger to themselves and those around them. So before you start writing think things through. They are not always the way they seem. Its a forum not a resume, paper, or a application. LET'S GET BACK TO THE POINT HERE!
Please don't take this as anything but another attempt to reach you on this subject, no offense to you is intended but it's hard to not sound harsh.
If I might be so bold I think it's you who is missing the point. I don't say that to be mean or funny or make you feel bad, I actually think you ARE missing the point regarding your communications skills. You came here looking for help in trying to earn or raise funds for school and are scoffing ar the most important advice anyone here can offer you...Dude you NEED TO FIX THOSE LANGUAGE SKILLS if you want to get anywhere in life!
This is a forum, that is true, however rather than that being an excuse for sloppy writing in this place what and how you write is absolutely and positively the only way anyone here can assess who you are. This is the universe of the written word, the fact that you write in a manner that produces nearly unreadable posts and then tell us that you can't be bothered writing clearly tells us that you don't take communication seriously.
My friend, if you approached diving like you approach the english language then you would never have made it back up from your first check-out dive...it is THAT bad and you don't seem to care.
Please listen to the very sincere advice that you have been given, don't tune this out like some kid with nagging parents...buckle down and learn proper grammar and vocabulary skills. It really is that big a deal in the real world, if your verbal communication comes off anything like your writing then it's going to be hard to get the break you are looking for.
Again, I apologize for what must seem like everyone ganging up on you but all it really is is everyone trying to answer your question about how to find help.